Thursday 8 September 2016

Colour Poem

I have been learning how to do a colour Poem I have been rhyming



 Colour Poem

WALT to use descriptive language to help create an image (picture) in our reader's head

Success Criteria
  • Use adjectives to describe the noun
  • Use adverbs to describe the verb (describe how the action is happening)
  • Use a range of verbs to explain what is happening
  • Use a range of nouns that help us identify with a colour


EXAMPLES

Black is the Colour of…….

  • A wicked witch zooming dangerously from castle to castle in search of potions
  • A lazy cat waiting patiently by the roaring fire for its night-time feed
  • A  majestic panther stalking its prey tactfully through the dense forest
  • A piece of licorice inviting me to sneak it from the brightly coloured box



Red is the colour of ……..

  • Slippery lipstick running down my face
  • A bright red Ferrari zooming fast in the race
  • Blood running down my foot, puddling on the ground
  • A rotten strawberry smelling like cheese
  • The sweet juicy raspberry dripping  from my mouth as I bite into it
  • A juicy watermelon inviting me to chomp on it

My colour poem:
White is the colour of…….

Old man's hair falling out and getting balder
Light pale skin covering someone's body

Frothy gigantic waves zooming across water currents

Cute bulldog puppies chasing their bones

Big fluffy clouds towering like giant marshmallows over all the buildings

1 comment:

  1. grate post.the describing word really put a picsher in my head

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